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once, near the blue lake
i sat alone dying
me and the sky were crying
thinking of my broken heart
and how i fell apart
my face was down
and the sky turned to brown
watching the tears of mine
asking when will the sun shine
then u gave ur hand to me
i raised my face up to see
the big smile on your face
the one i couldn't ever chase
soon after, everything is gone
ur smile went through every part of me even my bone
the sun , the sky and the blue lake appeared
my sadness , loneliness and my tears disappeared
u gave me your heart u changed me
that when i realized u complete me
©2006-2009 ~Cycloud-VII
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my first time in poetry XD
hope u like it

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:iconraichuruler:
omfg! ya got it up good job! mes love ya poem! its so cute and romantic! :hug: good job! :winner: :trophy: make more so mes get some more inspiration

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:iconwolfprincess728:
I like this alot!!!!!

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:iconcycloud-vii:
i appreciate that ^.^
thx
:iconheart-in-a-blender:
Awh. That's very good. I like it alot. ^^ And poems do come easier when you're in love?

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:iconcheezeeater12:
That is so beautiful! is that for anyone special? if it is they are lucky

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:iconcycloud-vii:
yup it's 4 someone ^.^
hope she is ok
:iconcheezeeater12:
so sweet! well she is very lucky! you write beautiful poetry!

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